2009年10月15日星期四

treasure time

The picture of melting clock shown in class gave me a deep impression. It warned us time is disappearing quietly. to own a meaningful life,we should treasure time.

sometimes time acts like a drop of water hides in the ocean.it is too little to notice.Thus we easily ignore it.However,in our limited life,time acts like a millionaire,he is s so mean that even we beg,he won't give us any favor.

i still remember when i was a kid, our teacher always worn us--"time is like the gold, but we can never buy it with gold."at that time,i was too naive to understand the sentence. All i know is that i am a little kid,i have a plenty of time to use.
yet actually, i am wasting my time as wasting my life. every time when we tear a day on calender,we are losing one day in our life.

There is a popular saying--time is money. but in my opinion, time is more than money.
for instance,a scientist can make a big contribution if they can get inspiration at any time. let's see if a scientist is watching a football game. while watching,he tries to connect the game situation together with his Rational analysis in order to indicate the possible development. during this process, his Rational and emotional thought get trained. Thus,his creative idea will benefits from it and lead to a big contribution.
secondly, the importance of time can be proved in business area. there are lots of business opportunities offered for people. if they manage the time properly, they will easily get the opportunities and win their business. time management is a key factor to the successful business.
what's more,time is also a significant factor in the war period. who catch the right time, who would win the final victory. At the end of world war II, no matter how powerful Germany was, they would still be a loser under the strong offensive from united countries.
The final example i want to list is the life-saving moment. in the hospital, life-saving is a every-minute-count task.in such arduous situation, even one minute later will cause the death.

however, there are lots of people don't know how to value time and use it to obtain more worthy things.
take gambling for example.you may be a big winner on the poker table, yet meanwhile, you lost your time, health and self-esteem.and the same thing goes for various gamers.those people never notice the importance of time. they chose to waste time and life.

yet to the success, they always understand the weighty of time and use it well.
when people are sinking themselves into the TV shows,scientists may completely concentrate on their research in lab; when people are still lying in bed, athletes may already finish their morning training.

time is important to everyone, we should treasure it as invisible assets and use it to enrich our lives.

please remember the famous saying:"treasure time is treasure our own lives!"

2 条评论:

  1. Well, I want to say that this essay is ok. The natural beginning is pretty good. Lots of examples are shown, which sufficiently support the idea that time is precious. Sentences structures are variable and people won’t get bored of it. However, there are still some weak points. The structure of the passage is not coherent enough. The examples are just pile up and there’s not much logic in it. The beginning is too long which will distract readers’ attention to your main content. In short, though it is good, I think there is still much space to improve.

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  2. You two guys did a wonderful job. Haijia did write a nice journal, and Mike gave thorough feedback about that. Both the journal and the feedback are very impressive. Two thumbs up!

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